Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 822,266 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Silent Feeling - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

Silent feeling

Woman must have kindness
And really to be seen on face
As all human beings require care and attention
To strengthen the bond and relation

So one must feel proud
And say loud
About being woman
And good human too

As females are known
For their pretty face to be shown
But not letting known about inner beauty
As blessed by an almighty

It is wrong on our part to evaluate
And clearly state
About drawbacks of nature
It shall be sheer displeasure

Let it be any woman for that part
She is an embodiment of an art
The special character on life's forum
Where we all play and gather on platform

The life shall be over soon
And sun may go high up with noon
We shall wait for coolness in the evening
So it is better to have silent feeling

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Comments about Silent Feeling by Hasmukh Amathalal

  • Upendra Upm (6/10/2017 2:36:00 AM)

    time -feeling combining and pursuing from noon to evening is his originality. (Report)Reply

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  • Mehta Hasmukh AmathalalMehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/10/2017 2:02:00 AM)

    The life shall be over soon
    And sun may go high up with noon
    We shall wait for coolness in the evening
    So it is better to have silent feeling
    (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, June 10, 2017



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