Flowing water brook you see
Sparkling silver water waves are sparkling you see
In sparkling silver waves you see the jumping fish
Jumps my heart to drink the water
This is English rendering of my Tamil White pa (Venpa) :
பாய்ந்து வரும்நீரோ டைதன்னில் பாராய்
பளிச்சிட்டு வெள்ளியாய் நீரலைகள் மின்னுதே
மின்னிடும் நீரலையில் துள்ளுதே மீன்கள்
பருகிட துள்ளுதே நெஞ்சு
- -இன்னிசை வெண்பா
VEN means WHITE; PA means Poem - -WHITE POEM
White here means the grammatical purity of its form.
This perfect pure poetry never allows relaxation of its
basic pure grammar rules.
This WHITE POEM is as immaculate as White LILLY Flower
A very well written poem Kavin.. The imagery is beautiful.. Thanks for sharing..
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
You bring the scene of flowing brook nicely before our eyes. Thank you.