Jasmine smiles
and Rose too with thorns all around
Breeze wonders when it enters the garden...
Newly blown flower
falls down on the sand
Dew Drops shedtears....
Beautiful rainbow
with its wonderful seven colors
when faded felt sad the blue sky....
The moon shined on full moon night
decreased and decreased and vanished one night
the darksky stoodwithoutanaddress....
That blooms one day will have to die next day. A poem with a strong imagery and nicely crafted to prove the point. 'The moon shined on full moon night decreased and decreased and vanished one night the darksky stoodwithoutanaddress....'.. is very nice. Congrats.
Jasmine smiles and Rose too with thorns all around Breeze wonders when it enters the garden... What a wonderful imagination and lovely graphic. thank u dear poet. tony
Beautiful rainbow with its wonderful seven colors when faded felt sad the blue sky.... The moon shined on full moon night decreased and decreased and vanished one night the darksky stoodwithoutanaddress.... - - - - -What a lovely write! Nature too shows its emotions in various ways!
Newly blown flower of love! ! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
I like 'Dew Drops shedtears.... ' except that, UNFORTUNATELY, the new format has, seemingly, messed up the spacing in parts of your poem, as the old format did at times. bri : )
Great imagery and your title is very fascinating....loved the way you got it.10++++
Sky without an address- -Wow- Such a beautiful imagery for expressing the feeling of sadness when we lose something very close to our heart. 'The moon shined on full moon night decreased and decreased and vanished one night the dark sky stood without an address....'
Colorful imagery in the sky without an address. Most telling reflections.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
the dark sky stood without an address....// without moonlit the night sky is dark; if there is no sun of this universe there will be nothing without dark/// oh the dark cannot be any address! /// greatly written