Sky Without An Address Poem by KAVIN CHARALAN

Sky Without An Address

Rating: 4.7


Jasmine smiles
and Rose too with thorns all around
Breeze wonders when it enters the garden...

Newly blown flower
falls down on the sand
Dew Drops shedtears....

Beautiful rainbow
with its wonderful seven colors
when faded felt sad the blue sky....


The moon shined on full moon night
decreased and decreased and vanished one night
the darksky stoodwithoutanaddress....

Sky Without An Address
Thursday, December 19, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: rose
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mahtab Bangalee 06 February 2020

the dark sky stood without an address....// without moonlit the night sky is dark; if there is no sun of this universe there will be nothing without dark/// oh the dark cannot be any address! /// greatly written

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Anil Kumar Panda 06 February 2020

That blooms one day will have to die next day. A poem with a strong imagery and nicely crafted to prove the point. 'The moon shined on full moon night decreased and decreased and vanished one night the darksky stoodwithoutanaddress....'.. is very nice. Congrats.

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Dr Antony Theodore 06 February 2020

Jasmine smiles and Rose too with thorns all around Breeze wonders when it enters the garden... What a wonderful imagination and lovely graphic. thank u dear poet. tony

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Bharati Nayak 06 February 2020

Beautiful rainbow with its wonderful seven colors when faded felt sad the blue sky.... The moon shined on full moon night decreased and decreased and vanished one night the darksky stoodwithoutanaddress.... - - - - -What a lovely write! Nature too shows its emotions in various ways!

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Edward Kofi Louis 06 February 2020

Newly blown flower of love! ! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 09 August 2021

A fascinating poem with a fabulous title...loved it

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Bri Edwards 23 January 2021

I like 'Dew Drops shedtears.... ' except that, UNFORTUNATELY, the new format has, seemingly, messed up the spacing in parts of your poem, as the old format did at times. bri : )

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M Asim Nehal 29 August 2020

Great imagery and your title is very fascinating....loved the way you got it.10++++

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Bharati Nayak 03 August 2020

Sky without an address- -Wow- Such a beautiful imagery for expressing the feeling of sadness when we lose something very close to our heart. 'The moon shined on full moon night decreased and decreased and vanished one night the dark sky stood without an address....'

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Michael Walker 06 February 2020

Colorful imagery in the sky without an address. Most telling reflections.

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