rinki nandy

Rookie (3rd oct / india)

Simple - Poem by rinki nandy

Simple

Mind spinning faster than a carousel,
thoughts moving faster than the speed of light,
am i here to bring delight? .
No response and no tense,
mind is....
traveling into the space,
nothing what it says makes sense,
mind is....
with and without fear,
still spinning on a pretense.
There is no....
mystery, no destiny and no metaphor,
it's all open shown to the mind and mind can't decipher.
'Need not complicate a mind so simple',
i have no answer.... when asked “why so simple? ”.


Comments about Simple by rinki nandy

  • (2/20/2010 10:24:00 AM)


    ‘…'Need not complicate a mind so simple’…’
    I just mu mu mu mu [caress] this line …excellent concept
    10+
    Ms. Nivedita
    10
    UK
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Poem Submitted: Monday, February 15, 2010

Poem Edited: Monday, February 15, 2010


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