rinki nandy

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Amazed - Poem by rinki nandy

Amazed

Your capability to think indirectly amazes me,
the ability to twist things around amazes me,
how you go on cribbing about the world being unfair to you amazes me,
my incapability to comprehend you at times amazes me,
how everyone is a wannabe to you amazes me,
your self obsession amazes me,
your notion of being the best amazes me,
your two sided nature amazes me,
times i feel that you are better than the rest but your proficiency in letting me down amazes me,
how you manipulate without being labeled as an opportunist amazes me,
how you make me pick up the pen and write this stuff amazes me,
the way you fool me with your straight talk amazes me,
way you make me think hard amazes me,
how you make me realize my faults and learn nothing amazes me,
way you make me feel useless and sick inside amazes me,
the fact that i can't ignore you amazes me,
my honesty amazes me,
my naivety amazes me,
my inability to become like you amazes me,
why i don't call this a complexity amazes me,
but people such as you don't seem to amaze the world,
as world's nothing but a place for manipulative people and that amazes me.


Comments about Amazed by rinki nandy

  • (7/13/2010 1:40:00 PM)


    A perplexed, complexed write. A good description of some of lifes mannerisms. Much truth here! ; D (Report) Reply

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  • (7/7/2010 3:26:00 AM)


    Amazes me….is amazing…human traits [highs and especially lows] are indeed baffling flummoxing…such traits are dip-stick test for any individual to discover one’s locus of focus…and accordingly design and programme for a favorable metamorphosis....not retrograde but anterograde…. thanks sharing
    Ms. Nivedita
    UK
    10/10
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  • Allemagne Roßmann (1/27/2010 11:18:00 AM)


    Quite amazing that you aRE amazed.10 plus pls. (Report) Reply

  • Melissia Ann Senter (12/25/2009 12:07:00 AM)


    Excellently written poem my friend thanks for sharing with me Melissia Ann (Report) Reply

  • (12/5/2009 5:37:00 PM)


    Wow how greatly you put together this poem amazes me lol. Great write I love the sarcasm thanks for sharin and remember. Spread Yourself! ! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • (12/4/2009 8:37:00 PM)


    I am amazed at how sad I feel, for if i was anywhere else you would befriend me.
    Where here I do not wish a call that for my friends seem to forsake me
    that where on earth I have no life that death is at times an ultimat pardon amazes me

    that they establish unreal in me amazes me, that I allow them to trick me amazes me

    the munmokon when 6 was 9 never devestates me. that time is more than measure that control is to be understood or the world dies from do-wanters of truth
    that try to tempt or haunt me why I allow myself to waken a fool every day escapeth me never morrow after today displace me
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Poem Submitted: Friday, December 4, 2009



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