Simple Wagon Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Simple Wagon

Rating: 5.0


The mind is such a complex paragon,
with heavy loads in it as simple wagon
Life is not easy to live and carry with
Walk on sharp weapon with meaning and myth

My heart beats to a lovely rhythm
Good art work I see always in poem
It is so sensitive but not as device
Respect to all wishes and to an advice

What do I owe to mankind and world as whole?
Never appreciate any or encourage little hole
Human bonding and peace almost should prevail
I shall not put myself first but chance all avail

I am not helpless but simple woman
No one can cheat including a man
He may has to face challenge and consequence
I may make him realize to the tune and dance


It is not simply hairs have turned gray
Earth may change into fine pot and clay
Feet may crumble but not out of fear
Time may be factor and brunt has to bear

I have my own way to lead a lovely life
Trustful as I am daughter, mother or wife
People may have lust and greed in their eyes
I may not bother with their hello and byes

I may pick garbage but not as scavenger
Infuse heart with sanity as kind massager
Life is to live with and lead as passenger
Try to live with honour and act as manager

Scraps and useless too have their values
Thrown may be away but have their dues
Life may go on and hardship may continue
New search must be on area and avenue

I know every dog has price
No one may need very simple advice
Courage you should have in critical time
Aim you should decide as goal prime

(collaboration….catrina heart…..hasmukh)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chaul Vania 31 August 2009

It is so sensitive but not as device Respect to all wishes and to an advice.........10

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Durga Sethani 31 August 2009

It is so sensitive but not as device Respect to all wishes and to an advice.....10

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Rupa Shah 31 August 2009

Life is not easy to live and carry with Walk on sharp weapon with meaning and myth......10

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Suresh Vakil 31 August 2009

Life is not easy to live and carry with Walk on sharp weapon with meaning and myth.........10

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Shilpa Maheswari 31 August 2009

He may has to face challenge and consequence I may make him realize to the tune and dance.........10

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Severina Dsouza 17 October 2009

The mind is such a complex paragon, with heavy loads in it as simple wagon

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Venkat Ramanna 15 October 2009

I feel she is near by and around Still not seen and could not be found Touches me gently when go round

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Sadia Hussain 14 October 2009

The mind is such a complex paragon, with heavy loads in it as simple wagon Life is not easy to live and carry with

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Sagarika Shah 06 September 2009

What do I owe to mankind and world as whole? Never appreciate any or encourage little hole.10

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Marieta Maglas 04 September 2009

lovely combinations between metaphors and similes, e.g.: ''The mind is such a complex paragon, with heavy loads in it as simple wagon'' excellent poem, wonderful rhymes, lovely to read.........10+++++++++

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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