Simply Simple Poem by James McLain

James McLain

James McLain

From Tampa Florida And Still Living Near By

Simply Simple

Rating: 5.0


Root this weed hot sweaty suns back
shallow breath much strength wanes.

Son of a son of an old weed harvest or
lieges crafty sight when sun agrees.

Pipes drink all of waters vintage on horizon
Hills many steps meander paths of goats.

Twilight salt clings snugly to bodies pits
Salvation rivers in small stream I bath.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

A refreshing(no pun intended) slice of poetics...fine detail & deeply rooted mind's-eye imaging highlight this well constructed, couplet-styled work. FjR '09

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James McLain

James McLain

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