Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 614,377 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Sin Is Invisible - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

No sins are seen unless committed
Air is going up only when emitted
Love the way as nature desires
Fall in line with and fully admire

No sense when it is realized late
Can not be contributed merely to fate
It is the way of feeling
Else everything is considered as willing

If you fall prey to colors
It will be unique with honor
As life is adventurous
Never stagnating but remains continuous

Some of the acts are holy
That has to be owned in faith wholly
No one has escaped and they need not be
It is totally one’s own thought and very free

One can take decision firmly
It has to be consented and not followed blindly
It may have all types of ups and down
The act may be committed when fully known

It has to be graced as customary
Some of the aspects are really necessary
It keeps natural wheel moving in direction
Let some of the our actions be disproved with


Comments about Sin Is Invisible by Hasmukh Amathalal

  • Sj Holland (6/26/2013 8:37:00 AM)


    This is a fast-moving but light verse about faith being a personal thing, as you describe in this stanza:

    Some of the acts are holy
    That has to be owned in faith wholly
    No one has escaped and they need not be
    It is totally one’s own thought and very free
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/26/2013 8:28:00 AM)


    Good of thought that sin is invissible


    Ofuonyebi 'Dinobi 8 minutes ago
    yes
    Comment +1
    Good


    Madhuri13 minutes ago
    Good
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/26/2013 8:24:00 AM)


    Sin invisible

    No sins are seen unless committed
    Air is going up only when emitted
    Love the way as nature desires
    Fall in line with and fully admire
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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, June 26, 2013

Poem Edited: Wednesday, June 26, 2013


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