Sin Is The Deity That Provides The Pain Poem by Maxwell B Anderson

Sin Is The Deity That Provides The Pain

Rating: 5.0


And another plagiarised
sweat moment
fixated at
or with
the
momentum
that causes stillness,
occasions of more tears.
Oh!
Why am I who I attest to be?
Disgust at my ransom,
Disgusted
at the refusal.
and now, dilemma.
At the pockets full of empty
that place
themselves at risk.
I now fill my pockets, and,
will meet you there.
Yes,
I am coming.
But
for my selfish self.
To be honoured,
but not
repaid.
Let's Go!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mohammad Akmal Nazir 30 June 2011

Great poem with a very strong structure. Nice sentiments and imagery. Voted 10. Thanks for sharing..... Kindly read and vote my poem 'A busy street' on page 1. Regards Akmal

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Maxwell B Anderson

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Auburn N.S.W. Australia
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