Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 689,276 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Sincere Gratitude - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

Not poets alone but readers too
Is responsible part to pass through?
The delicate phase of maintaining
Cordial relation and remain in tune to sing

How can noble soul depart?
From being a crucial part
To spread the message of love
And in peaceful existence to believe

I have felt so lucky
As readers were almost ready
To fall in line with stated position
And maintain the relation

I never felt that sky was empty
Or there was no grace from almighty
Heavenly bodies represented their voice
With existence to prove message with promises

I have tried to be simple
To crate no controversy or trouble
That has proved to be of paramount importance
To feel part in their presence

I am unsure if their find in me
But I have lot more to feel free
Their love of unmatched magnitude
That I can only show through sincere gratitude


Comments about Sincere Gratitude by Hasmukh Amathalal

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/19/2013 5:28:00 AM)

    really touching sir. You have shown the generosity of a man made of flesh and blood and still have retained the presence of a mind within not giving in to sentiments unwarranted. In spite of the veiled state of your reasons for writing this poem one has to thank you for sharing this sir.
    M D Dinesh Nair, VIJAYAWADA
    Jun 18,2013
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/19/2013 5:28:00 AM)

    A very nice poem of advice.Don't be a cause of controversy/trouble is to be specially appreciated with the poem.
    P Nasarudheen, Kasargod.Kerala
    Jun 18,2013
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/18/2013 9:22:00 PM)

    Laila (*-*)
    wonderful
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    DEVKISHAN MEH..
    NICE 1...
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    P() () j@,
    good sir, , , , , ,
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    RAVISH.... K
    SATYAMEWA JAYATE......
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    prasad bolimeru
    never felt that sky was empty
    nice
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/18/2013 8:51:00 PM)

    kind


    Reava Nuecome15 minutes ago
    very nice
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/18/2013 8:41:00 PM)

    Hafiza.mehwish tariq11 hours ago BUT ON THE WHOLE GOOD (Report)Reply

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/18/2013 8:41:00 PM)

    Jeremy Carsey11 hours ago I thought it was thoughtful and full of emotion, heart. Comment +1 SOME SPELLING MISTAKES (Report)Reply

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/18/2013 8:41:00 PM)

    kudos! huffy hunter9 hours ago thanks for such a soulful poem..deserves the stars. Comment +1 Something people lack, sincere gratitude (Report)Reply

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/18/2013 8:40:00 PM)

    munashemumbama@poetfreak
    All writers are important for sure and well written
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/18/2013 8:40:00 PM)

    leafsailor
    I join you in this loving poem It is a true heart speaking, you are a dear friend of mine also! ! ! thank you
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/18/2013 8:39:00 PM)

    Some Girl
    A lovely poem of thanks - reminding us to be grateful for the little things, which are also the most important :)
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  • Somanathan Iyer (6/18/2013 12:04:00 PM)

    great thinking! great expressions. Thank you. (Report)Reply

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/18/2013 9:36:00 AM)

    Sincere gratitude

    Not poets alone but readers too
    Is responsible part to pass through?
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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, June 18, 2013

Poem Edited: Friday, July 26, 2013


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