Shattered Poem by Lycko Chizo
Shattered
He used to be very silent
Dont even try to open his mouth
To let his thoughts and feelings to come out
He was always all alone with no one else
Nothing but a sad color
painted all over his face
Then he begun to be more lost
Will he ever find himself?
Will he escape the shadows
that eating his soul and flesh?
But eventhough he live,
his not really alive
Cause the great emptiness
killing him inside
So he look but cant see
Cant see hope, cant see nobody
Why does he always thought
that sadness will last forever?
That life is a melting candle;
that taste so bitter
So I go closer to him to touch him
But his lifeless body is not worth touching
Cause bullet hits his head
blood soaked his bed
I cant believe how he took away
his own life
I cant believe how I took away
my life
Now I am starring at my dead body
Regretting what I've done
If only I can bring back time
I will have not took away the life of mine.
If only...
This is well penned. Your poem was expressed well. When someone takes their own life, that is one of the worse mistakes they could possibly make. Good job on this poem, I give it a 10.
If only the world will value what life really is! Nice one you got there.
Soaked with the talents and sadness of a good poet. I love the stanza: 'Will he escape the shadows that eating his soul and flesh? ' that gave me chills. You feel how i feel constantly...sad. Thank you -Tyease
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/19/2024 7:14:20 AM # 1.0.0.1119
i loved this poem. It was amazin and u have the talent to achieve anything u want so dont give up hope and don't give up faith. I would like u to read some of my poems and tell me what u think about them either comment me or message me anyways. as i was saying u have the ability to achieve anything u just got to put ur mind to it okay. lots of love friend and best of wishes on ur journey of life.