Sisters! Poem by Meenal Manikantan

Sisters!

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Hey role model, my sister
By birth you are my partner
Whenever I call for mother
You come as a preface for her

You prompt my little view
I see the world through you
That I found myself is few
What you do is fancifully new.

The pen you use I target
To get your hand perfect
The bag you throw away
I long to keep my way

The clips that pin up your hair
Itch my eyes and make me glare
Waiting for a chance to wear
Borrow the style that you fare

Wonder the words that you flaunt
Wait and use them as I want
Songs you hum always haunt
I sing them, though you taunt

All said and done, somehow
Life will just halt, move slow
Without your lustrous glow
Affection that always flow

Hold my hand for I am young
Fill me with the sense you bring
Take along the way you swing
Teach me the hymn that you sing!

Parents are a blessed blend
As they can't follow till end
They gave a sibling - friend
To hold the umbrella, God sent!

Sisters!
Monday, February 20, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: sisters
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 26 February 2017

Good rendition of words with beautiful rhyme scheme. Piece of great elegance well penned from the heart with conviction. An insightful poem on the influence of 'big sister' over her much younger sister is aptly captured in the poem. A lovely poem indeed. Thanks for sharing Meenal. Please read my poem POETIC MASTERPIECE.

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