HER veins were full of rust and
corrosion, her eyes held pictures
of the past, black and white.
HER body capsized in a tub full
of sharks,
STILL she is brave, .
STILL she is strong.
HER mind starts to struggle,
her thoughts start to shout,
STILL she is brave,
STILL she is strong.
reading this makes my toes go all tingly and i want to hurry from the bath with my rubber ducky Warm regards allan
Hi David, don't 'say' Brave and Strong.' Show' it with images in the verses. You have a good workable image here- 'In a tub full of sharks'..
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
David, the emotion in this jumps off the page...