The sky turns dark as if
he understood my mood,
That billowing cloud sees
herself in the lake mirror
and adjusts her uncombed hair.
The trouts spring out to wish.
The moon has just arrived to
take over from Sun as a beacon
for the travellers on flight.
On those tall coconut trees
the baby breezes play swirl
holding their arm branches.
The lakeside tulips take off
their ever-smiling masks and those
lilies get ready for their night show.
The hilltop just shows his sunburnt
back to be cooled by the gentle shower
that has just begun
But my butterfly heart navigates
in the space between
those warm water drops
untouched...so lonely...
thinking of you...
just you.
This is a truly beautiful poem. The images you create in the first three stanzas blew me away! The last stanza says it all.....so aptly, so very sensitively, so lovingly. Top marks! Karin Anderson
A lovely evening indeed, then going to the one you love - very romantic write
just what I was looking for... melancholy! ! ! there is such a solace in lonliness..... there is nothing like feeling warmth of mother nature I love romantic poems! ! ! ! ! great job! ! ! last verse has H.L.V Derozio effect! ! ! gr8! !
I loved your ending verses....very heart warming poem...so heartfelt one! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! The imagery was great.......10
As I was reading a line after a line, I realized that each lines of yours is perfectly written. Very well done, my friend! 'But my butterfly heart navigates in the space between those warm water drops untouched...so lonely... thinking of you...just you.' So true, so real! ! Keep up your good work... K.Poornima
sitting by the lake on a lovely evening penning an equally lovely delicate poem of love...
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
i like this one.. nice interpretation and expression of your thoughts and observations. take care