Ode To My Child
Rating: ★5.0
The poems your fingers paint in air
is beyond my minds comprehensiveness -
yet electrifies everything around you.
The words you utter is unfound in any
lexicon of worlds purest languages -
still sounds godly.
Your rosy lips shed smiles for
moments like lightening-
Yet they suck sorrows out of hearts.
Your tiny feet kick those fairies
from sleep in heaven -
Yet they make all those stars
fall in as your toe nails.
I am waiting for all these to happen
so come soon oh child o mine
is beyond my minds comprehensiveness -
yet electrifies everything around you.
The words you utter is unfound in any
lexicon of worlds purest languages -
still sounds godly.
Your rosy lips shed smiles for
moments like lightening-
Yet they suck sorrows out of hearts.
Your tiny feet kick those fairies
from sleep in heaven -
Yet they make all those stars
fall in as your toe nails.
I am waiting for all these to happen
so come soon oh child o mine
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COMMENTS
Aparna Sinha
12 July 2009
a good one... personally i dont like use of words as 'dictionary' in a poem...but doesnt matter much if the poem ends beautifully....
This one did :)
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Aparna Sinha
12 July 2009
a good one... personally i dont like use of words as 'dictionary' in a poem...but doesnt matter much if the poem ends beautifully....
This one did :)
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Indira Renganathan
22 May 2009
I am waiting for all these to happen
so come soon oh child o mine.....sure, you will be blessed....my wishes
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Ency Bearis
11 April 2009
A great vivid write..awesome poem..it has the passion and ingredients of a nice poetry...10
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Joya Feghaly
11 April 2009
no words could describe how amazing this piece is! ! ! ! !
keep up the great work! !
~joya~
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Meggie Gultiano
01 April 2009
beautiful imagery you used here.And there is the value of waiting patiently.A nice write.
And a good poem.I love it.
Hugs,
meggie
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Leslie Alexis (heaven Is My Home)
01 April 2009
very unique piece f writing you have here. I have to love it.
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