Ode To My Child

Rating: 5.0
The poems your fingers paint in air
is beyond my minds comprehensiveness -
yet electrifies everything around you.
The words you utter is unfound in any
lexicon of worlds purest languages -
still sounds godly.
Your rosy lips shed smiles for
moments like lightening-
Yet they suck sorrows out of hearts.
Your tiny feet kick those fairies
from sleep in heaven -
Yet they make all those stars
fall in as your toe nails.
I am waiting for all these to happen
so come soon oh child o mine
Wednesday, March 25, 2009
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COMMENTS
Aparna Sinha 12 July 2009
a good one... personally i dont like use of words as 'dictionary' in a poem...but doesnt matter much if the poem ends beautifully.... This one did :)
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Aparna Sinha 12 July 2009
a good one... personally i dont like use of words as 'dictionary' in a poem...but doesnt matter much if the poem ends beautifully.... This one did :)
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Indira Renganathan 22 May 2009
I am waiting for all these to happen so come soon oh child o mine.....sure, you will be blessed....my wishes
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Sarah Childers 29 April 2009
It was so happy and perfectly beautiful, I love it.
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looking forward for a live poem...good
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Ency Bearis 11 April 2009
A great vivid write..awesome poem..it has the passion and ingredients of a nice poetry...10
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Joya Feghaly 11 April 2009
no words could describe how amazing this piece is! ! ! ! ! keep up the great work! ! ~joya~
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Reshma Ramesh 03 April 2009
wow.....the descriptions are amazing
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Meggie Gultiano 01 April 2009
beautiful imagery you used here.And there is the value of waiting patiently.A nice write. And a good poem.I love it. Hugs, meggie
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very unique piece f writing you have here. I have to love it.
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