Ode To My Child Poem by Putholi Arumugham T
Ode To My Child
The poems your fingers paint in air
is beyond my minds comprehensiveness -
yet electrifies everything around you.
The words you utter is unfound in any
lexicon of worlds purest languages -
still sounds godly.
Your rosy lips shed smiles for
moments like lightening-
Yet they suck sorrows out of hearts.
Your tiny feet kick those fairies
from sleep in heaven -
Yet they make all those stars
fall in as your toe nails.
I am waiting for all these to happen
so come soon oh child o mine
This was an outstanding writing. It had love, truth, and beauty. These are the things that make for great poetry. It was a pleasure to read this, clearly from a very creative mind. GW62
This poem is quite simply beautiful....it brings out warmth, love and great feeling 10+
very unique piece f writing you have here. I have to love it.
beautiful imagery you used here.And there is the value of waiting patiently.A nice write. And a good poem.I love it. Hugs, meggie
a good one... personally i dont like use of words as 'dictionary' in a poem...but doesnt matter much if the poem ends beautifully.... This one did :)
a good one... personally i dont like use of words as 'dictionary' in a poem...but doesnt matter much if the poem ends beautifully.... This one did :)
I am waiting for all these to happen so come soon oh child o mine.....sure, you will be blessed....my wishes
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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this one was great just keep it up nothing wrong with this one its was amazing 9+