Saturday, September 17, 2011

Six O'Clock News Comments

Rating: 5.0

he sat in the parking lot,
a Vietnam vet, breathing hard,
fog rising in the cold....
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Eric Cockrell
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Smoky Hoss 17 September 2011

I have to give you a ten for this one... it's the clean, stark power of your written voice that lures me into this poem. I do not often compare writters, but there is a sense of the simple beauty of Hemingway in this. Very strong, albeit sad poem.

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