Jim Norausky

Six Pack - Poem by Jim Norausky

Looking through the keyhole of an aluminum moon.

Sometimes laughing, sometimes depressed.

Many years caressing the notion,

That life is better when the potion is not suppressed.

Comments about Six Pack by Jim Norausky

  • (6/7/2009 8:33:00 AM)

    Your first line is extremely original. I doubt whether anyone else could ever think this one up.
    Witty and wise! 10 Karin Anderson
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  • (1/31/2009 10:12:00 AM)

    So much expression in so few words Jim...excellent poem...like it...Fi...10++ (Report) Reply

  • (7/3/2008 2:31:00 PM)

    So much said with such economy. And I understand exactly where you're coming from! I would probably take a page to express what you've just said in four lines!
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Poem Submitted: Sunday, June 22, 2008

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