Looking through the keyhole of an aluminum moon.
Sometimes laughing, sometimes depressed.
Many years caressing the notion,
That life is better when the potion is not suppressed.
So much expression in so few words Jim...excellent poem...like it...Fi...10++
So much said with such economy. And I understand exactly where you're coming from! I would probably take a page to express what you've just said in four lines! Brilliant!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Your first line is extremely original. I doubt whether anyone else could ever think this one up. Witty and wise! 10 Karin Anderson