Sky Is Fully Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Sky Is Fully

Rating: 5.0


Sky is fully loaded
As if exploded
Water all over

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 28 September 2013

Sky is fully loaded

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 23 October 2013

Re: The sky is..... (Score: 1) by ddkwenda I think there is more that could be said, like definitive coz so far this does not feel like a completed poem, more of a thought beginning to develop into one. Reply to This | Parent | Delete Re: The sky is..... (Score: 1) by jadia4708au on Wednesday, October 23,2013 (21: 31: 39) it is in haiku for. less is full.. regards

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 23 October 2013

Simple. James Pointer8 minutes ago Could do with more, but maybe the beauty is in the simpleness? Either way, there's something about it I liked. Comment +1 short but very visual

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 23 October 2013

Kesha Coggins8 minutes ago I like it a lot!

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 23 October 2013

Bu Magda likes this. Hasmukh Mehta welcome bu mugda a few seconds ago · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 28 September 2013

ok Elise EmmyLess than a minute ago good

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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