Sleep And Death Poem by Srijeeta Manna

Sleep And Death

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The wall between my mind and soul
takes away my might as a whole.
I lay here
lifeless, motionless and still,
resembling death.
Yet, I breathe deep inside
sunk in the ocean of sleep.
Losing in the depth of dreams,
me immersed in me.
Fathoms of darkness and light I travel...
I travel to reach there,
to unravel the mystery
of the simple distance between sleep and death
which is getting lesser slowly.

Tuesday, November 6, 2012
Topic(s) of this poem: sleep,travel
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sahil Sood 17 November 2012

really a nice poem. Just luvd the way you xpressd your thoughts with beautiful words

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David Gerardino 06 November 2012

like the poem/story, , for me the poem needs a little work...still worth reading.

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Jahan Zeb 06 November 2012

I loved the way you arranged the words in you poem. I felt pleasure in reading them. Losing in the depth of dreams, me immersed in me. What a thought. Sleep is half death Nice work

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