Sleepless Night Comments

There are nights when we sleep well, there are others when we do not. If I am thinking about something seriously, definitely I cannot sleep, but if I do not take a nap next day, the night will be just lovely.

The pathos of the poem has touched my heart! A unique poem of love and the suffering..

I like how you didn't say it was a thorn giving you pain. This means it could be anything.

Very well written! Great little poem..I just loved it.. Though the thorns gave you pain, the fragrance and beauty of the rose would have made it (pain) less...