Sleeps Freedom Comments

Oh my! What delicate and elegant wording and imagery in this one Smoky. It has a hypnotic effect that makes me want to go back and re-read it over again. I love it!

What a simple but promising poem. Beautifully written.

.........sleep is truly a mystery...life's process of a new day....eat, play and work...then go to bed tired...fall asleep and wake up refreshed....I find sleep is another remarkable mystery of life....adding this one to my poem collection..