Slow And Slow Comments

Nice pattern.. I like the line that reads with the tinkle of music that is nice.. Great piece Krista

love mixed with romance and care seen in your lines.....slow and slow lines makes me to involve.....quite and calm reading your lines my heart goes for a walk...sebastine

Sans rituals slipped the costume down the mounds, silk and the zephyr lit the fire of love with the vintage wine, for another night in the nest of love she gave in at last slow slow the visions show to the depth of your love amidst the tinkle of music for eternal breath in the open skies

nicely penned ++10 anjali

Slowness is the beauty of love.... Love dances in ecstasy in this poem.... Beautiful Sadiq......10/10.

Nicely writin... It shows your good taste....

Nicely done... I like this great write KRISTA