Thursday, July 12, 2018

Slow Salvation Comments

Rating: 5.0

When you walk on water
don't be surprised
that you can,
simply give thanks
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Smoky Hoss
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Glen Kappy 24 July 2018

hey, smoky! i'm reading this for the second time this morning. i guess the title attracted me, and i like this poem even if it leaves me wondering. it flows. and i relate to the images, feelings, and your own wonderings in it. blessings and blunders strikes me a particularly good phrase. -glen

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Lyn Paul 12 July 2018

A beautiful poem that brings thought of struggles through a life time with positive outcome. Wonderful words that have a calming effect.

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