Slow Salvation Poem by Smoky Hoss
Slow Salvation
When you walk on water
don't be surprised
that you can,
simply give thanks
for the temperature
below freezing.
Sometimes the cold
bears a blessing-
If you've felt
the sunshine
and ever wondered
if the sun is sincere
in it's warmth,
recall the days of clouds
understanding that even loss
can carry compassion-
Peace comes, and it goes
as it sees fit,
we, it's
image bearers
bringing burdens,
blessings and blunders,
never know for certain
if we are remembered or forgotten-
A beautiful poem that brings thought of struggles through a life time with positive outcome. Wonderful words that have a calming effect.
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4/16/2024 2:08:10 AM # 1.0.0.1119
hey, smoky! i'm reading this for the second time this morning. i guess the title attracted me, and i like this poem even if it leaves me wondering. it flows. and i relate to the images, feelings, and your own wonderings in it. blessings and blunders strikes me a particularly good phrase. -glen