Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 701,052 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Smile In Pain - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

“Life is not in our hand” many people profess
We too fall in same line and confess
Yet choose different line and approach
Life is then led differently as such

Most important part is to believe
Live within criteria and observe
How other living beings spend life?
Change accordingly the present trend

Keep hopes alive
Till you are permitted to live
Life may not deceive you
It will afford chance to prove

Act as human being
Whether you are poor or king
The situation is same
Never try to blame

Whatever you have that is by luck
Nothing has come from heaven and hardly struck
It is you own share and you are enjoying
The life should be spent without annoying others

“Do not end it in haste”
It may be disgrace and waste
Almighty has blessed you to live
Live with happiness and strive

Smile in pain and agony
Maintain love and harmony
That shall take you out storm]
The relation may remain always warm


Comments about Smile In Pain by Hasmukh Amathalal

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (2/17/2014 10:56:00 PM)

    Scott Ransopher Another good poem Hasmukh!
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (2/17/2014 9:20:00 PM)

    Maricela Ramírez likes this.

    Hasmukh Mehta welcome
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (2/17/2014 9:15:00 PM)

    superb


    Elizabeth Shapiro5 minutes ago
    exceptional poetry
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (2/17/2014 9:14:00 PM)

    life lessons


    Antonio Beardall6 minutes ago
    Reads like a manual for life. Well written.
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (2/17/2014 9:14:00 PM)

    It trails off and gets a little confusing at points.


    Morgan Lindsey6 minutes ago
    I didn't understand the use of quotes or the message of the poem.
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (2/17/2014 8:48:00 PM)

    “Life is not in our hand” many people profess
    We too fall in same line and confess
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Poem Submitted: Monday, February 17, 2014

Poem Edited: Tuesday, February 18, 2014


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