Mariyam Reyshma

Freshman - 868 Points (22/2/1984 / Addu City)

Smiles Make Me Smile - Poem by Mariyam Reyshma

Begin and end
With a great smile
I'm glad that I get a chance to watch you grow,
Enjoying, cuddling and praising 
Never no the time we spend each day
Holding tightly
And telling love them everyday,
I'm happy there's you 
To lighten up my day
With a great smile
And open up the door for the bright future,
I'm glad there's you 
To share my thoughts and understand
What I do and say
It's a great special bond
I feel that I have the most precious jewel
Holding my neck tightly
I'm so proud of you
To my lovely daughter and son,
I love you so much.

Topic(s) of this poem: kids

Form: ABC


Poet's Notes about The Poem

Children are gift from god. They are our future teach them well how to think rather than what to think.

Comments about Smiles Make Me Smile by Mariyam Reyshma

  • Edward Kofi Louis (4/15/2016 3:53:00 AM)


    It's a great special bond! Nice work. (Report) Reply

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  • Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh (1/11/2016 10:36:00 AM)


    A lovely poem.Feel it. (Report) Reply

  • (1/10/2016 10:25:00 PM)


    Children are so wonderful, loving you, smiling with peace in their hearts and the jewels of love sparkling from their eyes for their mother. Beautiful smiles bring joy to the heart. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn (Report) Reply

    Mariyam Reyshma Mariyam Reyshma (1/11/2016 12:20:00 AM)

    Thank you Rose :)

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (12/29/2015 5:01:00 PM)


    Yes, you are lucky
    to speak with honesty
    as you are gifted by an almighty
    to fulfill the duty

    females have that guts
    to speak with no ifs and buts
    but to speak openly
    and feel heavenly

    she can't hide emotions
    as felt in bond and relation
    that is her real feeling
    and virtually telling
    (Report) Reply

  • Paul Warren (12/29/2015 4:58:00 PM)


    A poem that has a smile in itself (Report) Reply

  • Geeta Radhakrishna Menon (12/11/2015 2:16:00 AM)


    A lovely poem and a lovely picture too. Felt so cozy and comfortable huddled together so lovingly.
    Mummy with her two sweet kids. Moving imagery!
    (Report) Reply

  • Jayatissa K. Liyanage (12/11/2015 12:21:00 AM)


    It is truly appealing and touching too. Thanks Mariyam, for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Rajnish Manga (12/11/2015 12:06:00 AM)


    Amazing articulation coupled with a wonderful narrative about a perfect happy family. Thanks.
    I'm happy there's you / To lighten up my day / With a great smile / And open up the door for the bright future,
    (Report) Reply

  • Mariyam Reyshma (12/6/2015 4:46:00 AM)


    Ofcause mother and kids relationship is the most complex..No matter how far away both lives no one can break them apart.....Thank you all..: D (Report) Reply

  • Bharati Nayak (12/6/2015)


    I am happy there's you
    To lighten up my day
    With a great smile
    And open up the door for the bright future- - Children are our future.Our joy and sorrows are connected with their joy and sorrow.They carry a bit of our personality.Our love and care make them grow.Their love for us also make our day.Their achievements are our pride.They are like precious jewels and really fill our life with happiness.Your poem reflects your feelings for children so nicely.
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  • Dr.tony Brahmin (12/5/2015 11:57:00 AM)


    I feel that I have the most precious jewel
    Holding my neck tightly
    I'm so proud of you
    To my lovely daughter and son,
    I love you so much. A wonderful praise of your daughter and son. love this poem very much. in very simple words you are proclaiming your love of your life. thank you very much. tony
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  • Edward Kofi Louis (12/4/2015 1:47:00 PM)


    To lighten up my day with the works of love. Nice work. Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

    Mariyam Reyshma Mariyam Reyshma (12/4/2015 2:41:00 PM)

    Thank you... :)

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Poem Submitted: Friday, December 4, 2015

Poem Edited: Friday, December 4, 2015


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