Kanishka SricharanPratap

Silver Star - 3,802 Points (08.12.1962 / Cuttack, Odisha, India)

Smoke - Poem by Kanishka SricharanPratap

This smoke is:
Our spell
Our chant
Our meditation!
Only for your welfare.

The rest
Of the earth
Water
Air
Sky
We will immerse
In the smoke!

You would be
Searching... and searching
Your lungs
Heart
Liver
Corn fields...
Everything,
Searching
In the smoke!


Translated from Odia by
Subash Chandra Mohapatra

Topic(s) of this poem: environment


Comments about Smoke by Kanishka SricharanPratap

  • Chinedu Dike (11/10/2019 8:28:00 AM)

    A brilliant work on environmental pollution, well conceived and nicely crafted with conviction. An insightful creation by an intricate mind. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched. (Report)Reply

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  • Bharati Nayak (2/17/2019 5:19:00 AM)

    You would be
    Searching... and searching
    Your lungs
    Heart
    Liver
    Corn fields...
    Everything,
    Searching
    In the smoke!

    - - - - - - - - A powerful and unique write on environmental pollution, thanks for sharing.
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  • (12/24/2018 6:00:00 PM)

    This poem is a powerful indictment against pollution of the environment. Excellent write, Kanishka! (Report)Reply

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  • (12/5/2018 10:48:00 AM)

    Wonderful poem..... A great poem on enviornmental pollution. (Report)Reply

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  • Drtony Brahmin (11/29/2018 6:31:00 AM)

    You would be
    Searching... and searching
    Your lungs
    Heart
    Liver- - - a very fine poem on enviornmental pollution......... fine poem which makes us think dear poet. thank you for this poem.. tony
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  • (11/19/2018 1:15:00 PM)

    Wow....a great poem. (Report)Reply

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  • (11/14/2018 11:11:00 AM)

    Wonderful...Really a great poem. (Report)Reply

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  • (11/13/2018 7:32:00 AM)

    We need to look at the environment and see what man is doing to it.
    A great poem.
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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, November 13, 2018



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