Kelsea Osterman


Snap - Poem by Kelsea Osterman

I hit it.
I have finally hit it.
I've hit rock bottom.
And the only person to blame is you.
You put me here.
You picked me up when I was done,
And then dropped me here where I lay now.
I can't do this anymore.
I can't live here anymore.
I refuse to let you put me here again.
But I love you.
‘Snap', there goes the branch.
I was so close but then I said it.
I said I loved you.
‘Snap' there it goes again.
The ground is littered with branches.
People ask me how
I can love someone who put me here.
And all I answer is ‘I love him'.
‘Snap', ‘snap', ‘snap'.
There go three more.
I'm so close to nothing.
I really have nothing.
I'm sitting here in this empty hole.
Where you put me.
Missing you,
Missing us.
Maybe when I reach the top
I will see the light.
Not likely but you never know.
I'll just all over again.
One hand in front of the other.
And up I go.
God I can't wait to get out of here and see his face again.
I love him so much.
‘SNAP'
I'm sorry I couldn't make it out.
I love you with all my heart.
Goodbye my love.
‘Snap'


Comments about Snap by Kelsea Osterman

  • Romeo Della Valle (4/21/2012 9:58:00 PM)


    Outburst of the heart magically well penned and touching! Impressive and powerful! Clearly you spoke your mind and also filtered your talent through it! Love it! 10+++ Thank you for sharing and keep it up, dear Kelsea! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City! (Report) Reply

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  • Daniel Warner (4/7/2012 10:13:00 PM)


    I wish you find a peaceful relationship in your life and with this poem it looks like life has given you a hard love life
    so I really hope you do better.
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  • Ryan Morris (4/6/2012 2:41:00 PM)


    Very powerful and full of emotion! Love does hurt, that is no mystery. Why is it we seek love, yet run from the pain. The heart is a muscle. Like all muscles, growth only comes after pain. I really like the drawn comparisons of going out on a limb. Keep loving! You love is truly a gift. I appreciate your passion. (Report) Reply

  • (4/5/2012 3:30:00 PM)


    I really like it. If the poems a true life poem,
    Find someone who will love you the way you should
    be loved. Your young and theres a big world waiting
    for you. Go out there kick some ass and find the true
    love that is waiting for you. A fantastic write.
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Poem Submitted: Monday, April 2, 2012



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