Snow Angel Poem by Gary Scott Gebert

Snow Angel



the first snowfall
we made snow angels

the yard white, wet
and a texture of nimbus clouds.

standing up
our shadow casts our ghosts across

and we waited
until the October sun melted them away.

Saturday, February 11, 2012
Topic(s) of this poem: clouds,ghosts,october,snow,standing
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rajendran Muthiah 11 February 2012

In the last three lines, an image nowhere seen has been created. Wonderful!

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Rajendran Muthiah 11 February 2012

The sixth and the eighth lines make an image that was never seen elsewhere. Wonderful!

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Gary Scott Gebert

Gary Scott Gebert

Milwaukee, WI
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