Snow Angel Poem by Gary Scott Gebert

Snow Angel



the first snowfall
we made snow angels

the yard white, wet
and a texture of nimbus clouds.

standing up
our shadow casts our ghosts across

and we waited
until the October sun melted them away.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rajendran Muthiah 11 February 2012

In the last three lines, an image nowhere seen has been created. Wonderful!

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Rajendran Muthiah 11 February 2012

The sixth and the eighth lines make an image that was never seen elsewhere. Wonderful!

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Gary Scott Gebert

Gary Scott Gebert

Milwaukee, WI
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