Friday, July 11, 2008

So Cold Comments

Rating: 4.6

What is it about the cold
that makes one feel so very old
It's icy fingers claw their way
tearing all life's warmth away
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Tia Maria
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Kris Smith 26 August 2008

Nothing a nice warm smile can't cure 10 Chris

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blue 802 11 July 2008

Nothing cold about your writing, my PB.

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Howard Johnson 11 July 2008

A vivid piece, some what depressing, The choice of words and word flow brings to stage the writers point, A reading pleasure for me, Thank you for sharing, Tia.

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Tsira Goge 11 July 2008

Like the icy grip of death... ................................. Sad but it is perfectly written... 10.. Kindest regards, Tsira

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David Threadgold 11 July 2008

it sums up the way I feel on cold days, a well done (10)

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