All Mary has your John
where you find the drink
finds the chalice too
All John is present
on feast days
to honor his sweet Mary
She is above
and Mary is your thirst
John is below
and he is her shelter
So Mary is a clear fluid
waters ~and waters under the bridge~
And John your blessing
Both of them in compassion for life
What is for her she gives to him
and for him must just ~ receive~
Liquid Mary
and become melted John!
both of them promises one to another
crying loud
But how many times
many Mary(s)
feels herself without your John
economized words but emotion is high by cycle of pair- the desire and his love great piece
The fluidity in the poem is very evocative... you did it perfectly well both explicitly and implicitly... in each stanza the reader is reminded of an essential element of life that keeps John and Mary on.. drink, thirsty, liquid, fluid.. and that was the first environment for life.. beautiful poem really.. One more thing it reminded me of joao e maria, words one meets on church walls in brasil
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
so true Mary has her John a nice write