Tuesday, April 29, 2008

So Sweet The Love! Comments

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So sweet the love
so bitter the break up

the heart-shaped
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Dónall Dempsey
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Scarlett Treat 06 May 2008

Wow, does that first line - so sweet the love, so bitter the break-up - ever tell it all? It couldn't be more clear how it hurt to break apart such sweet love, and you tell it so well by 'the heart-shaped watch.

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Original Unknown Girl 30 April 2008

Oh Donall, your poems are so universal. We all feel like this and you capture it so well. HG: -) xx

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Onelia Avelar 30 April 2008

A seagull blown inland observes all this&laughs... another one magic piece of true poetry

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Dónall Dempsey

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Curragh Camp, Co. Kildare, Eire.
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