Kumarmani Mahakul

Gold Star - 146,089 Points (Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA)

So Sweet Wind - Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

Very vastly I feel this wind
Blowing mind with vision tells
Sweetness is the key of life
By touch I feel lovely wish.

Wind is blowing to sing near
Whispering words birds fly
Far sky is very clear to hope
Many poets like sky as paper.

They think trees are pen and
Ocean water is ink we drop
Writing natural poems are read
By this wind we feel sweetness.

Poems float on webs of wind
At the same moment in each side
Every corner of world is wonder
So sweet wind carries letters.

Topic(s) of this poem: life, nature, poems


Comments about So Sweet Wind by Kumarmani Mahakul

  • Valsa George (12/1/2015 12:13:00 AM)


    Nature has everything to stimulate a poet's mind! The sky is like a scroll of paper spread wide, the trees are like pens and the water is like ink! Thus Nature itself scripts poetry! Only a man of great imagination can conceive of such images! A 10 (Report) Reply

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  • Edward Kofi Louis (11/29/2015 5:49:00 AM)


    Vision finds and love tells. Nice work. (Report) Reply

  • Rajnish Manga (11/29/2015 5:08:00 AM)


    Wonderful imagery about the magic show enacted by nature. Everything needed for writing a poem is provided by nature in the shape of sky, trees and ocean. With these implements in our hands, we can imagine the sublimation of an eternal poetry. Thanks, Kumarmani ji.
    Many poets like sky as paper.
    They think trees are pen and
    Ocean water is ink we drop
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Poem Submitted: Sunday, November 29, 2015



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