Monday, May 15, 2017

Sober Nights Comments

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Can I see myself young, after thirty years?
Can I hear your voice my friend, when I left you far behind?
Can I travel back and relive the times which I felt trivial then?
On this sober night, I fear to answer these, my friend..............................
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Parivallal Swamy
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Bharati Nayak 22 May 2018

I have explanations to give and riddles to answer, in life, I choose to remain silent and let my heart to ponder, What makes life complete, sanctity or love, I wonder sometimes, I tell others to find sanctity in love, on this sober night............. - - - - - Pondering over life's riddles- - - -Many questions remain unanswered- - - A lovely write.

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Rajnish Manga 26 June 2017

Entire poem is full of situations, questions and queries seeking to be resolved. Thanks for these philosophical musings.

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Parivallal P 27 June 2017

Thank you sir :) Always mind never rests itself. there's always a question to be answered. We find the answers during the course of our great journey in life.

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Jazib Kamalvi 18 May 2017

A wonderful poetic work. Thanks

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Parivallal P 18 May 2017

Thank you Jazib Kamalvi :)

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Bharati Nayak 15 May 2017

Can I see myself young, after thirty years? Can I hear your voice my friend, when I left you far behind? Can I travel back and relive the times which I felt trivial then? On this sober night, I fear to answer these, my friend..................... - - - - - -A really beautiful poem- - - - -Can we go back in time and correct all the mistakes we had done then? Most of us ask such questions to ourselves when we feel remorseful for past mistakes.Lovely expression of true feelings, thanks for sharing.

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Parivallal P 18 May 2017

Thank you very much Bharati :) I think you found the reason I wrote this poem :) I wish it sends the message to the one I intend to as well :) Thanks for your comment :)

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Fabrizio Frosini 15 May 2017

well.. I've read the 2 poems you've posted till this very moment and I can say that we have a real poet here.. WELCOME! many post their 'poems' at PH, but not so many real poets around.. A real pleasure reading true poetry. Thanks for sharing, Parivallal. Take care.

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Parivallal P 18 May 2017

Thank you Frosini :) I'm happy to see my passion finds finally a place to settle down :)

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Parivallal Swamy

Parivallal Swamy

Arakkonam, Tamilnadu, India
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