Paul Warren

Gold Star - 68,542 Points (ADELAIDE, SOUTH AUSTRALIA)

Social Comment - What Did You Feel? - Poem by Paul Warren

What did you feel as you pushed the knife?
Did all the strain disappear with this strife?
Did the lust for killing find you now
Or was it just your final bow?

What did you feel as you pulled the trigger?
Did it come through after your thoughts of rigour?
Was you point finally made
Once it was done did you make your grade?

What is left now that it’s done?
Was it the final act of knife or gun?
In these days of overbearing grief
Did you come taking a life as a unforgiving thief?

© Paul Warren Poetry

Topic(s) of this poem: social comment

Form: Prose Poem


Poet's Notes about The Poem

Thoughts on murder after two TV reporters is killed by an ex-employee of the same broadcaster.

Comments about Social Comment - What Did You Feel? by Paul Warren

  • Kim Barney (8/26/2015 8:32:00 PM)


    Two TV journalists were killed at the same station yesterday - - and while they were on the air! Is this the same incident you are talking about?
    You have some great thoughts.
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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, August 26, 2015

Poem Edited: Thursday, August 27, 2015


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