Solace Poem by Justin Long

Solace

Rating: 3.8


O'er the approaching madness,

Was their worry alight,
By a sun ever creeping,
Graves riddled beneath a canopy of the brightest light,
Covering the roots of the tree who,
By any other name would make sound the phrase,
Life hath gone and passed my by,
Beseeched that I may change my ways,

Wrapped up of seemingly confident rehearse,
Master of deceit, of darkness and worse,
Filtered through the strain of every downtrodden move made,
Lyrically though flattering timing isn't the only cliche',
So when I say it I mean it,
In passing,
In hesitation,
In desperation,
In realization,
In love,
In lust.

In ever so carefully worded ballads like ballistae through this broken, shell of a whole of a heart.

Burnt carcasses of every lie and wasted promise along the path lain before thee
Inspected by the inner workings of a hollow man.

A hollow heart,
A feeble attempt at normalcy,
Overshadowed by the beauty in his darkness,
The pain,
A struggle,
A journey,
The reckoning.

Stricken with the heat of a snuffed out flame,
Of an adversary proven time and time again to succeed,
Wherewithal exceeded and will tainted with blame,
Characteristically ruined if you believe what you read,

An exclamation: "WOE! ",
For I have thoughts and a brain,
Yet I'm too scared to live
And I'm not quite sane,
To live is to risk and to love is to live,
So, in stride, I have decided,

To: The Past
I have nothing to give.

Friday, March 30, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: dark,love,love and life,past,time
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
First poem so far any and all feedback would be greatly appreciated.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bernard F. Asuncion 31 March 2018

Justin, such a lovely narrative👍👍👍

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Jazib Kamalvi 31 March 2018

A good start with a nice poem, Justin. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 30 March 2018

Welcome to PoemHunter. Yes, nothing can be given to the past. Brilliant toughts always dwell in brain. We need to feel. Love constructs lovely values in mind. Love means to live and living means to love. This love connects us with God. While love is there in life we forget struggle and pain. This poem is excellently penned...10

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