Crazy Vampire

Rookie - 0 Points (07/15/94 / Hemet, California)

Solution? - Poem by Crazy Vampire

I am falling into an never ending hole of my mistakes
I am suffocating in this black lake
What more can be taken away?
Someone end my nightmare, my nights and days

My knight is no where to be found
I am alone in darkness, there is nothing, not even a sound
My life is a prison, I can't break lose
I dont want what my parents want, yet i cant choose

to leave them behind
Who they want me to be, i cant find
What's the solution when you are alive, yet dead on the inside?
To be someone i am not, i will never decide


Comments about Solution? by Crazy Vampire

  • (5/10/2010 4:01:00 PM)


    Very good, and I'll tell you this, I've been raised to keep a hard mind not being able to show any emotions but some things you said, I've felt before (Report) Reply

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  • (5/10/2010 3:34:00 PM)


    ur poem was very good, and idk if u'll believe me but ive felt like that for a long time before, i went crazy in my head trying to hide all the feelings ive felt (Report) Reply

  • (5/6/2010 2:13:00 PM)


    A very gloomy and sad poem. Thumbs up! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, May 6, 2010



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