Broken Heart Poem by Crazy Vampire

Broken Heart

Rating: 5.0


i trusted you and you broke my heart
i feel as if there is no need to move on, to start
i fell and forgot all the warnings i was told
i loved you and my heart you stole

but once you had it locked up, you walked over it
and before i knew, you said we were over, so you split
and now i dont know what to do
because i am still in love with you

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
BEAU GOLDEN 26 March 2010

Cute, succinct. Rhyming an conveying a message

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Lindbergh Hughes 13 April 2010

A tender, nice and sweet poem! ! ! I love romantic poems.Even those ones which talk about the disappointments that we suffer in love.I love the way the poets describe their feelings in their poems. Keep writing +10! ! !

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Michael Brock 19 April 2010

good poem, not only in youth is the heart broken, its ageless thanks for sharing Michael

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Kitty Vans 21 May 2010

i know how that feels im going through it right now....

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Vaughn Bekker 21 May 2010

nice poem, how sad does the soul of a broken heart sing, crying quietly the empty little thing, i wrote one 'so many broken hearts', you may like it...

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ahhhh...the pain of a broken heart...its just so unforgivingly-forgiven....you got through it didnt you....? ? ?

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Rijad Islamovic 12 May 2010

the sweet pain of a heart so broken.... love it :)

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Edder Ramirez 21 April 2010

its a great poem this has happend to me not long ago and i am still in love with the girl

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