Crazy Vampire

Rookie - 0 Points (07/15/94 / Hemet, California)

Blind Reality - Poem by Crazy Vampire

you are the opposite of what everyone thought
we were close no matter how many times we fought
but this time its different...it is WAR!
i shall not defend you before others anymore

i will let you fall, and when you do i wont be there to help you
maybe this will teach you not to screw
with people and things that do not pertain to you, so butt out
there is no need for you to scream and shout

if you play with fire, sooner or later you will get burned
on you i have turned
because i realize that we may be family, but that doesnt make you right
i am disgusted by you, get out of my sight

from this day on, we are no longer related
i cant stand you, and all of your hatred
your stubborness makes you weak, and that is your downfall
you will be alone in this world your pride has built a wall

its blinds you from the harsh reality that you dont want to see
you will drown in your own lonley black sea


Comments about Blind Reality by Crazy Vampire

  • (5/21/2010 2:05:00 PM)


    i love it it is very strongly written and it shows how many emotions can go through you at one point (Report) Reply

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  • (5/18/2010 4:54:00 PM)


    i love the poem, it is really well written, well done
    thnx

    ps i like the title also, totally fits what it represents
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  • (5/13/2010 2:01:00 PM)


    very well written... i completely understand were your coming from... love it! (Report) Reply

  • (5/13/2010 1:15:00 PM)


    woahnesss! ! !
    heard it all loud & clear! ! .....soooo well written...ur point was made ->.
    there u see it? ?
    lol jk xP
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  • (5/12/2010 6:56:00 PM)


    Thanks for the invite...i can see the closeness and disappointment...very honest! Continue to write... (Report) Reply

  • (5/12/2010 5:40:00 PM)


    Well-written...very true indeed. (Report) Reply

  • (5/12/2010 5:10:00 PM)


    Ahhh......
    Sweet reality, revealed at last-
    Dissolusion wrought thou hast.

    One must face reality before they can master it.
    Good poem - keep up the good work.
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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, May 12, 2010



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