Some Fame Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Some Fame



I shall dream nothing
Which shall not stand for anything?
Rather I will choose and opt
Where path is open and kept

I shall minimize greed
That shall not be y deed
I will strive for better life
Even if it is razor sharp knife

What is need for more money?
When not needed for any purpose
If you are better placed and happy
Try not for more to become busy

Wealth may get you some fame
But bring in shame too
You shall be blinded with power
And that shall place you lower

So enjoy when sun is high
Relax when it is night
Sleep well with rest in mind
Peace shall always be kind

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 03 August 2014

Really like the idea Derek Levin34 minutes ago I really like the main idea of what you are writing about here! I´m a little confused by the razor sharp knife line. Also the structure seems to be constantly changing which seems strange, unless that was your intention! :)

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 03 August 2014

INTERESTING ARRANGEMENT OF THOUGHTS paul naragon3 minutes ago THANKS FOR SHARING.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 03 August 2014

I shall dream nothing Which shall not stand for anything?

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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