Wednesday, November 30, 2016

Some Gold, Before I'm Dead Please Comments

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If I were a digger
of silver and gold
and a spinner of tales
brave and bold,
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Smoky Hoss
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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 30 November 2016

Miner, The hope of human has achieved a lot with lots of hard work..I enjoyed reading your poem..

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Kim Barney 30 November 2016

Ah, relax, you're still a lot younger than I am. I enjoyed this poem. I especially like these lines: would a treasure I find in the caverned depths of earth or mind? Or am I a mere dreamer, an empty and pointless schemer, lacking the skills of hope, an arrogant and ignorant hapless bloke?

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