The dark night has set in
It is one more day for setting of sun
I have taken challenge
And mostly proved of an age
I don't remember
How many days are over?
But it passes smoothly
Life seems so lovely
I have never thought
To be caught
By some stranger
To enter
But I dream sometimes
To have good company to recent times
The fresh flowers attract
Full blossom compels me to act
Yes, destined time may reach
At any time it may approach
I will waste no more time
But accept and welcome
Freedom Jeremy Palmer26 minutes ago Your flow is very open. not holding to tradition form. But still is unknown which direction and what is the feeling of the work.
Marvelous Dushyant BholaLess than a minute ago Good write on some strangers. Nice and vivid imagery. Comment +1 .
deent poem, Nathaniel HoBs Jenkins5 hours ago I enjoyed reading it
Good poem carlos santiago10 hours ago Of a truth Comment +1
Nice poem. Good words. MALLIKA GANGAKHEDKAR11 hours ago Good words, with good meaning.
welcome Shamenaz Shaikh and Chantal Jager like this. Just now · Unlike · 1 1 hour ag
Very nice Mrinmoy Choudhury28 minutes ago A very good write - I like it. I like the following lines - Yes, destined time may reach At any time it may approach I will waste no more time But accept and welcome Comment +1
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The dark night has set in It is one more day for setting of sun