Someone Knocks At The Door - 02 Poem by Subhas Chandra Chakra

Someone Knocks At The Door - 02

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I hear from
a not so far distance
someone whispers
so erotic in
the ears of the buds
to open their eyes
with a smile
towards all around-
perhaps the chirps,
the sweet notes
of birds in the groves,
the colour on the
cheek of clouds
flying west-
are all, that makes
it all, so obvious
that the moment-
the moment of
first date
between the Earth
and the spring
has just arrived.


And perhaps
spring is going to plant
his first kiss
on her petal cheeks.

Friday, March 2, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: love and art,seasons,spring
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Subhas Chandra Chakra 04 March 2018

Thank you Robert Sir for your lovely remarks.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 04 March 2018

The reply button has stopped working since last two days.So we have to use the bypass thus.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 04 March 2018

Thank you Rajnish Sir for the great remarks and these warm words of encouragement.

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Rajnish Manga 03 March 2018

A spirited song of springs nicely composed. Thanks.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra

Subhas Chandra Chakra

Sainkul, Anandapur, Odisha, India
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