Something Poem by skitzophrenic lost

Something

Rating: 5.0


I feel like I need something
Something to fill this empty void
Since you left me dry and empty
Everyday is something I hate
The hope you filled me with is gone
All the love we had is lost
And agony fills these empty veins
They said the heart collector sings his song
I guess that means he's sang me tune
My heart is gone forever, in pieces
with you

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mohammad Akmal Nazir 01 July 2011

Excellent write with a very strong structure. Great sentiments and incredible imagery. Voted 10. Thanks for sharing..... Kindly read and vote my poem 'Abortion' on page 4. Regards Akmal

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