Our Mistakes Poem by skitzophrenic lost

Our Mistakes

Rating: 5.0


So many long days
That I can't remember
So many hard nights
That lasted forever

So many running tears
That It'd never end
So many fake smiles
And it was all pretend

We see our mistakes
And the world turns
We take for granted
These lessons learned

And over and over
We make them again
A failure in life
Beyond deaths end

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Brian Jani 14 June 2014

Nice and original

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Dave Walker 21 December 2011

Really enjoyed this. A really great poem. A good write. May i invite you to read my new poem called, For Paul Blacburn. Its a true story.

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Ramesh Rai 21 December 2011

Dear friend, mistakes are mistake and that is gone, need not to worry for that. one thing is true, every thing is prearranged in this nature

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Pari Dharawat 23 November 2011

Gotta learn from the mistakes, we make while learning phase. structured, has nice rhyme to it, good poem to read enjoyed reading it. Keep on writing

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