Friday, September 7, 2012

Something Moved Comments

Rating: 4.8

The crack of a twig, the twitch of a tail,
Something moved on the jungle trail.
Crickets chirped in the warm night air,
And all the time, something else was there.
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heather sweeting
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Guy Lip-more 11 September 2012

Very well written, great poem.

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Valerie Dohren 11 September 2012

Great story, very well written.

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John Brown 11 September 2012

I enjoyed this Heather. A fine, well written piece.

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