Tuesday, February 28, 2017

Sometimes Comments

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Sometimes
I wish I was a bird
And had wings to fly
To fly up the sky
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Hajaarh Muhammad Bashar
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Jazib Kamalvi 30 July 2017

A great start with a nice poem and fine wish, Hajaarh. You may like to read my ars poetica named as (Poetic Sense-1) Thanks

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Chinedu Dike 02 March 2017

Lovely philosophical poem nicely brought forth from the heart with insight. Thanks for sharing.

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Kim Barney 28 February 2017

I think everybody has had that same wish at some time or another, to be able to be a bird and just fly wherever we want. A very nice poem. Welcome to Poem Hunter!

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Hajaarh Muhammad Bashar

Hajaarh Muhammad Bashar

Minna, Niger state
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