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Good write dear poet.....

your inner light is shining on this poem! spectacular and vivid! amazing!

when me grows older, it a map of the world on my face, leave a time, and show important roads................yes wrinkles akin to map of wisdom............but when we transcend the wisdom and our mind make home in divine sphere our face perhaps become wrinkless like a child..................Unless and until you become guiless like child you cannot enter into kingdom of heaven.........Christ.............Good Write........

' I don't have the face for effect, ...' - yes, it is very good poem. Thank you! :) DA