Some people listen to the song
while others listen to the voice.
The audience often gets it wrong,
confused, because it has the choice
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I couldn't agree more. Very well said and put together in a very readable and strong poem. Great rhyme scheme. Technically very sound and cleverly stated. I've enjoyed the great majority of your work I've seen posted here over the past few weeks. I lift my glass to you. - Prosit!
I thought it was brilliant till the end which was kind of a forced line in that it had to rhyme. Still, the rest of it and the idea was great.